一位六年级小学生写的英语小文章

House, it’s very important for us, because we must study, live ,and sleep in it .
My dream house is very different from the usual house. I would like to introduce it to you if you are interested in it.
The shape of my dream house like a strawberry; the roof if green, and walls are red.
Let’s enter my dream house and look around: it consists of a living-room, a study-room, a bedroom, and a bathroom. The wall of the bedroom is covered with mink, so that I can sleep with a sweet dream and feel more comfortable. There are a lot of things in my house ----such as computers,televisions, telephones, tables, beds, and so on. Of course, the cost of my dream house is very big, too.
How can make my dream come true? We will realize it only by our hard working.

作者：饶月 武汉市第二师范附属小学六年级
常青藤英语RITA 老师点评：饶月同学梦中的小屋象一颗草莓。绿色的屋顶，红色的墙面，富有想象力，屋内的摆设既现代又舒适。一位小学生能用地道的英语写出这么生动的短文 真让人兴奋。